opens one tiny crack
revealing not the moon
but a single star
close to where
by my reckoning
the moon should be.
I know my night skies.
I remember the Gulf —
lying back on the deck
of the trailer-sailor,
awed by a sky wide open
displaying not only moon
but every star
and the travelling satellite
tiny and pale,
the fine web
of the Milky Way
in intricate detail, and sweet
familiar constellations.
Now I am sheltered
by mountains, tucked
in a blanket of cloud.
A door begins to open.
Journalling my relationship with the moon: 9
I really like this. the fine web of the Milky Way" so evocative.
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ReplyDeleteI really feel like you're describing the moon (or even a star) as a door to heaven. :) This is such a gorgeous poem, Rosemary. I love stanzas 3-5: a perfect blend of the personal and universal. Thank you for this, and also thank you for stopping by my LJ! :)
ReplyDeleteMany thanks, alotus; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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