I ... entered the poem of life, whose purpose is ... simply to witness the beauties of the world, to discover the many forms that love can take. (Barabara Blackman in 'Glass After Glass')

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Showing posts with label haiku sonnet. Show all posts
Showing posts with label haiku sonnet. Show all posts

28 September 2016

Perspectives

closing the doors 
from house to garden –
smell of new paint

nervous cat
under my chair –
saws whining

radio next door
cheerful loud voices –
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my prick-eared cat sits alert –
I fall asleep in the sun


Linking this to Poets United's Poetry Pantry #323


23 September 2016

Homecomings

my old cat
sits on the top step –
no longer

his sister 
crosses the lawn –
memory

my new cat
waits inside the door –
greets me gladly

I wipe the tears and go in –
smile as she comes to meet me


Another haiku sonnet. I'm linking it to Poets United's Poetry Pantry $324

9 September 2016

Walking Around Town

burly boys
jitter and fidget  –
testosterone 

old man totters
hurrying to the bench 
almost falls

she stops to rest
drinks from her thermos 
lightens the load

strong smell
outside the library –
smoker

rain starts in big splashy drops 
small mosquitos come inside


Another haiku sonnet – or senryu sonnet – for Poetic Asides.

Also linking to Poets United's Poetry Pantry #320, and to the 2019 dVerse Sonnet Challenge.

This one was placed in the Top 10 for the Poetic Asides challenge, which not only delighted but surprised me, as it is more senryu than haiku. 

I loved the opportunity to combine two classic forms into something new, yet still recognisably true to both.


8 September 2016

Uncertain Weather

on next door's roof
tarp and sandbags for leaks –
Housing Department

used for rain
silver tarpaulin shines
in the sun

Spring colours –
pink and white sandbags
suddenly

wrinkles
in the tarpaulin –
new clouds

still air –
a slight breeze rustles
tips of leaves

on an early Spring morning –
will it rain will it not rain?


Another haiku sonnet for Poetic Asides.  (Expect more.)

7 September 2016

The Garden Microcosm

pink blooms
fully open turn white
then brown

my cat twists
on her blanket –
mosquito

agile cat
captures baby lizard 
loses it

old rose-bush
well-pruned doesn’t bloom
not a bud

Spring – new lives may be short lives
and some lives never begin



















A haiku sonnet for Poetic Asides form challenge. I prefer short/long/short haiku lines to 5/7/5 syllables – but we were asked to make the final couplet lines of 7 syllables, so I did.

Also linking to Poets United's Midweek Motif: Blooms (noun)