moonlight
rainfall
street lights
grey-blue mist
backlit clouds
not one star
moondark
light rain
street fall
backlit mist
blue-grey clouds
no night star
nightfall
dark street
rain-lit
star-mist dark
light grey-blue
back street night
street rain
light fall
dark moon
Journalling my relationship with the moon: 30
And submitted for dVerse Open Link Night #11
Included in the book, THREE CYCLES OF THE MOON
And submitted for dVerse Open Link Night #11
Included in the book, THREE CYCLES OF THE MOON
another moon journal...enjoyed this rosemary...very cool wordplay here...reads smooth like peanut butter with some crunchy pieces crackling on the tongue...hmmm..i like
ReplyDeleteOh, thank you Claudia. Your descrpition is poetry too!
ReplyDeleteloved the way you mixed the same words up throughout the poem!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the repetitive lines.. works so well to convey the dark moon night ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Caty and Heaven. This is a different way of writing for me, so I'm very gad you think it works.
ReplyDeleteInteresting minimal poem with emphasis worked throughout with the repetitions of the words. Taking a topic and reworking it is effective for finding your voice and your style. Well done. G.
ReplyDeleteNew voice and new style, it seems! :-D Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI love this style, how you switched the words around, that's so inventive.... Bravo!
ReplyDeleteJohn, I didn't start out with that intention. I wrote the first verse, got interrupted, and when I came back to it, after I wrote the second verse, suddenly that was what was there to do with the words. I guess inspiration can happen for form as well as content!
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