tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post7042791710496408358..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): Dark MoonRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-17302325335526278792011-09-30T16:08:02.731+10:002011-09-30T16:08:02.731+10:00John, I didn't start out with that intention. ...John, I didn't start out with that intention. I wrote the first verse, got interrupted, and when I came back to it, after I wrote the second verse, suddenly that was what was there to do with the words. I guess inspiration can happen for form as well as content!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-53980088315456734372011-09-30T10:25:07.621+10:002011-09-30T10:25:07.621+10:00I love this style, how you switched the words arou...I love this style, how you switched the words around, that's so inventive.... Bravo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-33861227821718356252011-09-29T11:55:47.654+10:002011-09-29T11:55:47.654+10:00New voice and new style, it seems! :-D Thank you....New voice and new style, it seems! :-D Thank you.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-27581785934486723302011-09-29T07:27:44.966+10:002011-09-29T07:27:44.966+10:00Interesting minimal poem with emphasis worked thro...Interesting minimal poem with emphasis worked throughout with the repetitions of the words. Taking a topic and reworking it is effective for finding your voice and your style. Well done. G.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-61350592239371756942011-09-28T22:57:52.168+10:002011-09-28T22:57:52.168+10:00Thank you Caty and Heaven. This is a different way...Thank you Caty and Heaven. This is a different way of writing for me, so I'm very gad you think it works.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-48377003077455077482011-09-28T22:46:18.197+10:002011-09-28T22:46:18.197+10:00I enjoyed the repetitive lines.. works so well to ...I enjoyed the repetitive lines.. works so well to convey the dark moon night ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-5003765426733249312011-09-28T17:29:00.775+10:002011-09-28T17:29:00.775+10:00loved the way you mixed the same words up througho...loved the way you mixed the same words up throughout the poem!Cathy Feasterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302068829418562420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-5140962416019630582011-09-28T15:54:32.582+10:002011-09-28T15:54:32.582+10:00Oh, thank you Claudia. Your descrpition is poetry ...Oh, thank you Claudia. Your descrpition is poetry too!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-9925851137304497822011-09-28T15:48:34.782+10:002011-09-28T15:48:34.782+10:00another moon journal...enjoyed this rosemary...ver...another moon journal...enjoyed this rosemary...very cool wordplay here...reads smooth like peanut butter with some crunchy pieces crackling on the tongue...hmmm..i likeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com