I pass the cane fields, some of the cane still standing, some burnt back to the bare, blackened ground. A few have tiny new plants already growing. In the background are wooden houses on stilts, ramshackle, dotted across the landscape, distant from each other behind clumpy dark trees. The sky is awash with low grey cloud. We cross a bridge. The wide flat river is likewise grey.
In Vincent's landscape, here on my iPad, the fields are rolling waves of colour – vivid blue and green, splashes of sunny gold. The sky is riotous too, only a little lighter, as if reflecting the land. A haystack nestles in front of a cluster of houses, all of them white-walled and blue-roofed. The Autumn trees are orange and gold.
The scene I am passing through alters to high-rise city – shops, offices, tenements. The walls are beige or grey, the roofs dark red or brown.
The scene I am passing through alters to high-rise city – shops, offices, tenements. The walls are beige or grey, the roofs dark red or brown.
These contrasts deceive. I am travelling towards our Summer country. Northwards, the further we go the more the sky lightens, becoming suffused with sun.
sad or mad –
yet in pulsing colour
he paints joy
Image: View of Church of Saint Paul de Mausole, by Vincent Van Gogh
Written for dVerse Haibun Monday 3
Linking this to Poets United's Poetry Pantry #281 (December 6 2015)
How wonderful that you can travel in two ways the same time, through the landscape and into the painting at the same. Traveling can be so very meditative.
ReplyDeleteGreat haibun, interweaving two scenes.
ReplyDeleteYour landscape is different but I do love colorful paint of your travels ~ Hope all is well ~
ReplyDeleteCity roads path stress to work..
ReplyDeleteCountry Roads Beta to
Alpha to close to
theta.. fields
of dreams
release
creativity
as flow
in the zone..
True journey
as path of art..
is in the mind and
body in balance a
work of art and human bliss..
the perfect cure as practice
for an artist like Van Gogh
if not Van Gogh himself...
Rewards intrinsic
Alpha Theta..
flow bliss in zone..:)
Delighted to have sparked this lovely response!
DeleteLovely piece ... I enjoyed this very much.
ReplyDeleteI n the opening I enjoy the visual and emotional concept of the dead and the new growing together. Thank you!
ReplyDeletea vibrant write...very much visual...love how you describe Van Gogh's art...
ReplyDeleteThis is nice for the paragraphs presented, not the visual ones; the appreciation of the persona of things real and surreal, the voices of artists divine and human, and the perspective of the writer actual and poetic
ReplyDeletehave yourself a wonderful Sunday Rosemary
much love...
You have a good travel companion at least - beats the inevitable person who may not smell very nice and overlaps the seat boundaries! I love the journey and perhaps colour comes from all those things - mad, sad...or happy - as long as there is colour..there is joy...
ReplyDeleteHe does paint pulsing energy!!
ReplyDeleteI was there with you, drinking in the fields and then colors of man-made things... I love the movement of the description--the poem let me feel the motion of the car. And the haiku? Perfect. Riding with Van Gogh, indeed...
ReplyDeleteSigh... pulsing colors of joy is a delightful scene :D :D
ReplyDeleteLove the two scenes as they come to mind and consciousness....fabulous!
ReplyDelete"He paints joy" - what a wonderful phrase. Love the photo, the painting and the wonderful poem, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteSo true....as 'mad' or 'sad' as he was, he painted joy. Perhaps it was in painting that he found joy....
ReplyDeleteThis is such a wonderful piece! I love how it's all about art and reality, and how it never quite stacks up. But, this seems to be the point. The art stands still, while the world moves on,
ReplyDeleteI like your take on this lovely piece of art. Poor Van Gogh, he had a hard time in his life and being here brought him a measure of peace. Mad, sad, glad - truly he painted with joy and I like how you let us know that.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the changing view through the hands of time. The scenery different but Van Gogh painted with joy..ah yes I can feel the colors bursting with happiness
ReplyDeleteVan Gogh's early works were dark, sombre and with little life and yet in his mental unease he produced the most impressive and colourful work to influence and astound us even today; so much so that even we can see such colour in our lives as you have done in your haibun about your own country. This is so well written.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this haibun pinned against your photo and the Van Gogh painting. A wonderful post, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteYou made that painting come alive. I have just started watercolour painting and it is truly joyful.
ReplyDeletei like how you contrast the darks and greys of the first strophe with the bright colours of the second.
ReplyDeleteindeed the colours van Gogh used in his more famous works are in contrast to his tormented life.
Love the contrast between the real and the artist's eye. Two well written descriptive images...the outer and inner perspectives. Campbell says we must follow our bliss...and we must.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Thanks for posting this lovely poem. It makes me think of Oscar Wilde's discourse at the beginning of Dorian Grey--art doesn't copy life, life copies art. Here you refuse the copying, each is whole and engaging in itself. Love it. And love the joy of heading North.
ReplyDeleteVery picturesque scene painted with your words,
ReplyDeleteSorry to comment so late Rosemary. I'm glad I did. Enjoyed your description, and of course the contrast to Van Gogh's happy and imaginative colors. Your haiku is perfect. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteHappy to receive your comment any time, Myrna! (I am often late getting to people's posts too, because life happens – but I'd still rather that than miss out on reading poems I enjoy.)
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