I ... entered the poem of life, whose purpose is ... simply to witness the beauties of the world, to discover the many forms that love can take. (Barabara Blackman in 'Glass After Glass')

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12 June 2015

Mutual Love Rhapsody

dream beside you
my soft song
listen
come the hope
charm with another evening
word over time
remember
belong when home here
heart has gentle regard
believe star wish
we want us
tell strong river
as faith bloom full

as faith bloom full
tell strong river
we want us
believe star wish
heart has gentle regard
belong when home here
remember
word over time
charm with another evening
come the hope
listen
my soft song
dream beside you



At dVerse Meeting the Bar, we are invited to write a palindrome or mirror poem. Perhaps I'm not very inventive just now! After the first abortive attempt, my mind went blank — until I resorted once again to the Magnetic Poetry site. Perhaps not a huge challenge, but all I can manage at present. I used the Love kit this time. The title came from the kit, too.


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17 comments:

  1. Sumana Roy12 June 2015 at 20:43

    a beautiful poem of that heart immersed in dream and soft song...a lovely palindrome...

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  2. Blogoratti12 June 2015 at 20:53

    Dreamy piece of love and so much more.

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  3. X12 June 2015 at 21:12

    Nice.I appreciate the feel of the piece. It has a bit of a stop and start flow to it that I think could be overcome by breaking up the larger stanzas a bit, imho

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  4. kaykuala12 June 2015 at 21:24

    Wonderful palindrome Rosemary! The magnetic poetry format obviously is so useful!

    Hank

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  5. Roslyn Ross12 June 2015 at 21:33

    Lovely, soulful and dreamy.

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  6. Mary12 June 2015 at 21:41

    Magnetic poetry does work.

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  7. Grace12 June 2015 at 22:20

    I admire the gentle words of love and hope for the soft dreams ~ Nice work on the palindrome form ~

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  8. lynn__13 June 2015 at 00:09

    Lovers' palindrome! I especially like line, "heart has gentle regard"...this comes with years together.

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  9. Glenn Buttkus13 June 2015 at 01:08

    You conquered the form admirably, & had some fun too; dreamy & romantic, indeed. I have never heard of or tried "magnetic poetry"; guess my personality is magnetic enough already (smile); not. Will perhaps look into it some day.

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  10. Unknown13 June 2015 at 03:46

    the heavy romantic feels are very calming. Nailed the form!

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  11. Victoria13 June 2015 at 04:05

    There is such a calm and gentleness in this, Rosemary. Something we need more of.

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  12. Unknown13 June 2015 at 04:33

    I am so glad you reposted a poem. I've never done the magnetic poetry before and it sounds so very interesting! This is such a wonderful romantic poem and while it may have come from a "kit", there is so much of you in it that just makes it unique and enjoyable. Excellent form!

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  13. Anonymous13 June 2015 at 06:31

    Oooh, I quite like this!!

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  14. Katie Mia Frederick13 June 2015 at 08:09

    (:..Healing Songs Love.. synching unalike..
    breaking barriers.. comes light.. melody strong
    butterflies of kisses live
    live kisses of butterflies
    strong melody.. light comes.. barriers breaking..
    unalike synching.. Love Songs Healing..:)

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    1. Rosemary Nissen-Wade13 June 2015 at 10:20

      Loving your poetic comments, here and on other people's blogs. Thank you.

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  15. Orchis13 June 2015 at 23:08

    This is a beautiful line: "heart has gentle regard"

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  16. Sanaa Rizvi15 June 2015 at 10:20

    This is beautiful - an absolute dream like effect! :D

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