I ... entered the poem of life, whose purpose is ... simply to witness the beauties of the world, to discover the many forms that love can take. (Barabara Blackman in 'Glass After Glass')

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Showing posts with label villanelle. Show all posts
Showing posts with label villanelle. Show all posts

24 June 2017

Think Positive

The TV shows me Kenyans dying of drought.
Cattle become skeletal; babies droop.
On facebook people chirrup:  'Life works out.’

The parents of the babes don’t scream or shout.
They weep, but are resigned. Their shoulders stoop.
The TV shows them close up, dying of drought.

Calm commentators tell what it’s about.
I pour myself another bowl of soup.
On facebook people burble: ‘Life works out.’

The self-help gurus urge us, 'Banish doubt!'
I sign a petition, join a spiritual group.
The TV shows me Kenyans dying of drought.
On facebook, though, we know that life works out.


Prompted by dVerse: How to Write a Villanelle (I have written this one a little bit 'wrong'; let's call it a modified villanelle.)

5 April 2016

Night, Rain ...

A shimmer, white
against the pane,
at the edge of sight …

Might
it come again,
shimmering, white?

Faint, not bright:
drifting rain
at the edge of sight

dims the light
to a mere stain,
a shimmer of white

pale on the night –
a hidden pain
past the edge of sight.

I seek to deny it,
refuse to entertain
that shimmer of white,
at the edge of sight.


April Poetry Month, day 5. Tuesday Platform at 'imaginary garden with real toads': any topic, with the option (which I took) of writing a villanelle.

The topic is inspired by the latest quadrille prompt at dVerse, to use the word 'shimmer', But I couldn't fit my villanelle into a quadrille, no matter how economical with words I tried to be.

Also submitted (three years later) to dVerse Forms for All – the Villanelle, in the hope that it may still be eligible.