I ... entered the poem of life, whose purpose is ... simply to witness the beauties of the world, to discover the many forms that love can take. (Barabara Blackman in 'Glass After Glass')

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Showing posts with label tilus. Show all posts
Showing posts with label tilus. Show all posts

2 December 2015

Bits and Pieces

Some micropoems from my files, which it seems I haven't posted here before (arranged in alphabetical order by name of form, not by date of writing) –


Erotic haiku:

our soapy hands
as we shower together
slip and slide

1/8/15


he bends his head
I stand on tiptoe
our first kiss


3/8/15

(No need for curiosity, dear readers; there's no-one new. I write my erotica these days from memory and imagination.)


Gogyoshi:

so many clouds
plump and round
and apparently rollicking
over their big blue meadow —
kids in a playground


2/8/15


Senryu:

cold morning 
waking to back pain
and cat on bed

21/8/15


aqua-aerobics
I float in warm water
emerge wiped out


23/10/15


Tanka:

the rain stops
the stars are still dark
blanked out
the night’s loud silence
pierces like a scream

7/5/14


Even with 
the toy teddy bear 
beside me,
I fail to sleep –
until I clasp it.

18/8/15


on holiday
I begin to lose me
in the new
until this morning
I make a poem – ah!

25/8/15


I reach up
pull off and crush
a thin leaf
inhale the tang
of eucalyptus 

we do this 
starting in childhood
we Aussies
instinctively
breathing in home

26/8/15


like water
the light slants down
pouring
like silver rain
on your shining face

7/10/15



Tilus:

long grief, then all at once
I reclaim

me

9/6/14


the small cold days come down
I winter

lone

12/6/14


Linking to the Tuesday Platform for 1 Dec 2015 at 'imaginary garden with real toads'

17 May 2014

The Unconscious Comes Up

Half asleep, I recall
that teacher

who

tormented us children
long ago.

Then

I drift into a thought
of murder—

what! —

pushing her down a cliff …
gentle me.

Shock.


(Written as a series 
in tilus

form.)


For the Poetic Asides prompt: The unexpected. 

Note: For tilus explanation see preceding posts or click on tag.

16 May 2014

Tilus Against Cycling

1. Motorist’s Lament

A narrow road, a mob
of cyclists —

Curse!

Double lines,
must not pass

go.

Slow up the hill, behind
chug, clatter

squeak.

All those tight, bright bottoms
in my face

eww!


2. Pedestrian’s Lament

“Easy as riding a
bike” — but I

can’t.

Nervous little mother
insisted

not.

When I got to fifteen
new schoolmates

tried.

Lunch-time lessons each day
in the lane

but.

You leave some things too late —
forever

lost.


I fell in love with this three-line form (used for a dVerse prompt in previous post) and decided to use it again for Poets United's Bicycling prompt, creating two chains (how appropriate for cycles, lol).

Tilus for a Friend


Text from my friend: cancer
surgery

now.



Sunny autumn morning
clouds over

fast.



The tall tree by the fence
unchecked weed

grew.


Each of the above can stand alone. Also they work as a sequence, and that works in whatever order you read them.  They appear in the order they were written.

The tilus is a form invented by Kelvin S.M.  At dVerse just now we're asked to give it a try. The tilus is supposed to be about nature, but I found it also worked well for the thing uppermost in my mind at present (see first stanza above).  Then the nature ones I tried reflected the same mood, like an oblique commentary on the first. I realised I had not only a series of separate poems but also a connected sequence.  Then I noticed that the sequence worked in any order.  So all in all a very useful form!