He was a good lad,
a right good lad.
I liked the boy well,
he had a lot
he had a lot
of possibilities.
Mighta been
the kid I never had.
Could-a taught him
a good trick or two
for making his way.
But, when you came
right down to it,
he was one of them –
not exactly gentry
his own self, but
fixing to earn their praise
and respect, and get on
that way, rising
by virtue of virtue,
you might say.
Ah, Jim! I was never
going let them kill ye.
Too bad we didn’t both
get away together
with all that treasure.
It could have been
a grand life. But there –
I’m getting too old
to travel with youngsters.
And me pretty parrot …
would Captain Flint,
and I couldn’t have that.
Been with me a long time,
that cranky old bird.
Robert Newton as Long John Silver, in the 1950 Treasure Island movie. Image: Public Domain.
Poem written for The Villain Speaks, Day 15 of April Poetry Month at 'imaginary garden with real toads'.
You have captured the vernacular very well, Rosemary. An interesting idea that 'villainy' may well be a question of social class.
ReplyDeleteI think Stevenson did present it that way, whether unconsciously reflecting his cultural conditioning or meaning to portray it.
DeleteYes! I'm so glad you brought this out, Rosemary. Well done.
DeleteLong John and the swashbuckling crowd all with their ruckus!
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I really liked the nod to class here too. Really excellent take on one of my childhood favorites.
ReplyDeleteI can hear them so lively in my head. And what Kerry said.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely LOVE the voice in this, Rosemary. You've nailed it.
ReplyDeletecharming, Rosemary ~
ReplyDeleteI felt like we were in a pub, sharing an ale, while you were shedding this tale
ReplyDeleteSo clever! Thanks for the smile! K.
ReplyDeleteI sure did like the accent here, it came through very well. Guess too "Jim" came through okay.
ReplyDeleteI love the voice in this poem, Rosemary 💖 you bring back so many memories!
ReplyDeletePirates - romanticized for sure, but I love them - old movies and the new... :) Great capture
ReplyDeletePirates, they always reel me in. I'm with Margaret. I love me some pirates. :)
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