I wish I had had this,
and I want to deny.
The moist earth
has forgotten she ever knew me.
Remember how I hated them —
symbols of someone I no longer recall.
(Yet would still embrace always,
beyond this realm.)
31 Poems in 31 Days (from Poewar / Writer's Resource Center). Prompt: Choose a writing process you haven't tried before. I tried something I once read of: choose someone else's poem, respond to each line with one of your own, remove the other poet's lines, tweak. The result is a work of fiction and I think the narrator must be a ghost! The source was De Profundis by Lorca.
I tried this technique once, it is a good one. Love what you dd with it, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteSad and very sweet all the same time. And I like the format, I just hope you're not feeling too sad.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I promise it's fictional.
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