There was something about the dizain,
It suited me down to the ground.
It is not the case with the trimeric.
(I keep wanting to call it turmeric.)
It suited me down to the ground,
the dizain. But the trimeric puts me in mind
of ground-up spices – or, I suppose, ground down.
It is not the case with the trimeric
that my mind rises lightly to the challenge
like a perfect syllabub. (Syllables are not to be thought of.)
I keep wanting to call it turmeric,
and to take ship for the spice realms
to acquire more flavour, or even a whole new recipe.
Written in response to a form challenge at Poetic Asides.
Sharing (July 2017) with Poets United's Poetry Pantry #364
Written in response to a form challenge at Poetic Asides.
Sharing (July 2017) with Poets United's Poetry Pantry #364
Hahaha! My favorite is "ground-up spices – or, I suppose, ground down."
ReplyDeleteI love wanting to call it turmeric..........LOL.
ReplyDelete"Syllabub"! What a perfectly spectacular word. And it looks quite delicious; I just came across a delectable picture of some.
ReplyDeleteI love this! So delicious! Susan has already quoted my favorite line! And isn't doing a whole new recipe challenging and exciting?
ReplyDeleteThis is very clever, kiddo. You rocked the form, and humourously.
ReplyDeleteI really like the humor, the lilting melody, the form - and especially the play on words with trimeric and turmeric
ReplyDeleteGot me into the mood for a perfect sunday curry... :)
ReplyDeleteOh this is absolutely delightful!❤️ Especially loved; "I keep wanting to call it turmeric, and to take ship for the spice realms to acquire more flavour, or even a whole new recipe." Beautifully rendered!❤️
ReplyDeleteThanks for making me smile - much needed delight
ReplyDeleteHow essential it is to see the funny side of medicine and the reasons for the pills and potions. I was reading only recently about the number of dangerous drugs we ingest in Australia in the battle with our ailments and wonder if they are really necessary.
ReplyDeleteMore culinary than medicinal in this case. (Grin.)
DeleteLOL nice one Rosemary
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Love the form -delightful spicy poem - had me smiling and rocking along
ReplyDeleteFun to read!
ReplyDeleteHmmm. This was an educational (?) experience. First I had to investigate trimeric, and find it is made up of three monomers. Next I had to investigate monomers, and find they are a component of polymer. Next ... there was no next, I was hopelessly lost! Very clever poem, my friend!
ReplyDeleteThis made me laugh (sorry). Didn't mean to tangle you up like that.
DeleteAfter reading the last line of your first stanza, I could only smell spices...
ReplyDeleteThis is a frolicking little gem & now I'm thinking of Thai for dinner
ReplyDeleteFun read today and I loved it!
ReplyDeleteWhat fun as I kept wanting to call it turmeric as well...a flavorful poem.
ReplyDeleteA spicy frolic. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteDelightful spicy poem :)
ReplyDeleteTurmeric has become one of my favorite spices.
ReplyDeleteMine too!!! Very versatile & healthy too.
DeleteAdding some spices to your poetry - I wonder how many times I've called something by a different name though?
ReplyDeleteClever and spicy.
ReplyDeleteThis is a clever treat, dished up with a dash of poetic edification. It gifted my day with a whiff-of-spice smile. Loved it!
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