comes in the form of a small, white-whiskered cat
(otherwise black, as if not a messenger of light).
The inner dark is down so far deep, it seems
from above, a mild grey only, or a gentle gap,
an undisturbed stillness on the surface of water –
as good as invisible, almost; nothing to remark.
Indeed, it is absence. I could call it loneliness
or loss. But those are the names of clichés
and you are not that – you who are gone
and never gone. In that hidden inner garden, if
the light could shine so deep, I might discern
roses and lavender, hear the clash of metal on stone.
Shine a torch! Bring a spade! Let's excavate! No, not.
Instead, a delicate feline arrives in my life. A gradual
trust is blossoming between us, fragrant. She is new,
she has nothing to do with my dark (she has her own).
It is only that, when day dawns, the extending sunlight
slowly illuminates even abysses, even labyrinths.
Ah, lovely. Sad
ReplyDeletea new favorite of yours. The absence is so powerful. Great you have cat though. K.
the light could shine so deep, I might discern
ReplyDeleteroses and lavender, hear the clash of metal on stone.
Oh Rosemary this is soo deliciously dark and beautiful! Thank you so much for linking with Prompt Nights :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
oh I love that first line of the cat coming in bringing light... and I can feel her nesting and glowing to give warmth... wonderfully vivid and so much of both light and darkness.
ReplyDeleteGoodness...this is as mysterious as thouse light whiskers on this beautiful dark cat...I love the play of light and dark throughout, Rosemary...so deep.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful take on the title and a really thought-provoking poem. I was touched by the depths of emotion between the lines.
ReplyDeleteSad sweet and lovely Rosemary!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good, Rosemary. My favorite lines are the first two--I love what they say about the cat in the poem, about black cats in general, and about the speaker's (and many people's) perception of what might be helpful, positive, and bright.
ReplyDeleteHow cool that she has white whiskers! I resonate with "you who are gone and never gone".....I love the arrival of your "delicate feline" who has her own dark, and the trust that is growing. So lovely.
ReplyDeleteI love the fragrant-blossom connection between you and your black beauty...sweet...
ReplyDeletethe comforting fragrance of lavender and a pet to befriend you, a delicious overture of words
ReplyDeletemuch love...
I understand so well how a delicate feline can bring light into one's life. And that trust...that trust...can enrich life. And yes, she has nothing to do with your dark. SHE is a fresh start.
ReplyDeleteSweetly done. Cats can bring great solace. Interspersed with feline indifference.
ReplyDeleteAnd that light... The warmth it brings... The solace it gives... Nothing like that... U captured it nicely :)
ReplyDeleteThe last 2 lines say the ultimate truth of life :)
ReplyDeleteThis completely resonates with me at this time.. I love the line She is new,
ReplyDeleteshe has nothing to do with my dark (she has her own)... it almost describes what I feel but had no words for. Thank you!
I love how the title flows into the poem - like a cat's tail gently wrapping around our legs..quietly opening the words..this is a terrible cliche but we do indeed seem to need light in order to see the dark and vice versa..also made me think of the sea and plunging so deep the sun gets lost
ReplyDeleteIt is only that, when day dawns, the extending sunlight
ReplyDeleteslowly illuminates even abysses, even labyrinths
In one's darkest hour there is always the silver lining the next day that accords salvation most sought after!
Hank
the dark is the light, how nice!
ReplyDeleteyour picture reminds me of a black cat that hangs around the compound of my workplace. it's eyes glow green in the dark. it's wary of people, but okay with me because my friend and some of the guards leave food for it. :)
There are those days that are so dark and deep, nothing can shine a light in we think...and then a little miracle happens by to give us one beam that shines brightly! Love this....
ReplyDeleteMy new favorite of yours! This I know:
ReplyDelete"The inner dark is down so far deep, it seems
from above, a mild grey only, or a gentle gap . . .
And the rest is revelation. Thank you!
Beautiful....
ReplyDelete"a delicate feline arrives in my life. A gradual
trust is blossoming between us, fragrant. She is new,
she has nothing to do with my dark (she has her own). May the little cat protect and, dispel the inner darkness, and fill you with the resplendent light ...
The poem leads to profound revelations of emotion. .. I love this, Rosemary!
one has to let the light in very consciously to come out of that abyss
ReplyDelete...all deservingly said. :-)
ReplyDeleteZQ
I love the juxtaposition of darkness and light in this piece and especially that a black cat brings light :-) Yes, indeed they do!
ReplyDeleteI like 'Instead, a delicate feline arrives in my life. ' ~ it feels so in a
ReplyDeletecounterweight of possible searches...and so balanced with all above. Just marvelous piece.
Even though we long for it, the light can seem so hard to find. Thank heaven for little furred creatures who need our attention and give without thought.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
I love the imagery here! :)
ReplyDeleteThe intricate weaving of light and dark images, impressions and achingly, deep reflections is beautifully crafted. The little cat seems to pitter-patter through the piece, as if in pursuit of that evocative, coalescing thread that leads the way out of the dark labyrinth. Wonderful writing!
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