Softly calling
across hilltops
oceans and skies:
the memories.
Across hilltops
as on bird wings –
hear them flutter.
Oceans and skies
ripple with white –
wave tips and clouds.
The memories,
evanescent,
hint and linger.
This is so gorgeous, Rosemary......
ReplyDeleteVery delicate, love the last 3 lines particularly
ReplyDeleteas the waves of memories
ReplyDeleteThe hint of evanescent memories... sigh!
ReplyDeleteThis reads like a white blossom laid on snow. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautifully executed, Rosemary. You have the lightest touch.
ReplyDeleteAnd Brendan said that better than I.
DeleteMy goodness! This is absolutely stupendous!💝
ReplyDeleteTender & enchanting - a beautiful poem, Rosemary. "Evanescent" will indeed linger with me a while...
ReplyDeleteTo me this can both see this as looking forward connecting with the past... love it.
ReplyDeletefluttering memories. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very beautiful and delicate poem. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletedreamlike ~
ReplyDeleteThis is so peaceful, Rosemary. Just what I needed. I was feeling bad about getting to the Tuesday prompts late, but I feel lucky to read this today. Thank you.
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