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7 November 2010
Looking for Us
looking for us over the heads of the crowd,
jumping up and down with big grins
behind the thin rope barrier —
half a dozen of our Balinese friends.
We started jumping and grinning too.
I’d missed that spontaneity, that truth.
Back in Melbourne, whenever we mentioned
our new friends, old friends said,
‘You mean — NATIVE people?’
We gaped at them in turn.
Suddenly we were among strangers.
‘You wouldn’t like it so much,’ said Melbourne,
‘If you went again. It was the novelty.’ No, it wasn’t.
We weren’t searching for ourselves;
we didn’t know we were lost.
But our hair grew thick, our nails grew strong,
our backs became straight and flexible,
and every day we laughed till our stomachs hurt.
Melbourne said, ‘You wouldn’t like it
if you lived as the people do.’ Wrong again.
In the quiet night of the village,
sitting with the women of the family
on Putrha’s veranda, learning to weave
palm leaves for the next day’s offerings,
I was at peace and at home. It was good
to be in my skin, and see my own thread
in the great fabric: tiny, essential.
November PAD Chapbook Challenge 2010: 6
Prompt ‘Looking for ...’ [and fill in the blank].