I ... entered the poem of life, whose purpose is ... simply to witness the beauties of the world, to discover the many forms that love can take. (Barabara Blackman in 'Glass After Glass')

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15 May 2017

Leaves Float Away – tan renga

autumn evening
like whispered prayers
leaves float away                             © Dolores Fegan

darkness settles slowly
warm like prayers answered            © Rosemary Nissen-Wade 

or:

my outdoor temple breathes
peaceful in the soft breeze               © Rosemary Nissen-Wade


Another  prompt from Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem: 
Tan renga challenge 2017 #9.

7 comments:

  1. You added a touch of hope. Thank you.

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  2. As yes!!! we are indeed temples, nice responses Rosemary

    much love...

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  3. This has such a lush of hush.

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  4. Gorgeous. I especially like "warm like prayers answered".

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  5. Like the first one better as spiritual insistence is provoked. But both are great, Rosemary!

    Hank

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  6. Both continuations are awesome, both very spiritual, but I think the first completes the Tan Renga in a great way full of spirituality.

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