I ... entered the poem of life, whose purpose is ... simply to witness the beauties of the world, to discover the many forms that love can take. (Barabara Blackman in 'Glass After Glass')

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15 May 2017

Leaves Float Away – tan renga

autumn evening
like whispered prayers
leaves float away                             © Dolores Fegan

darkness settles slowly
warm like prayers answered            © Rosemary Nissen-Wade 

 or:

 my outdoor temple breathes
peaceful in the soft breeze               © Rosemary Nissen-Wade


Another  prompt from Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem: 
Tan renga challenge 2017 #9.
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 May 2017 at 11:13

    You added a touch of hope. Thank you.

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  2. Gillena Cox16 May 2017 at 02:08

    As yes!!! we are indeed temples, nice responses Rosemary

    much love...

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  3. colleen16 May 2017 at 02:23

    This has such a lush of hush.

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  4. Sherry Blue Sky16 May 2017 at 02:33

    Gorgeous. I especially like "warm like prayers answered".

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  5. kaykuala16 May 2017 at 12:03

    Like the first one better as spiritual insistence is provoked. But both are great, Rosemary!

    Hank

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  6. Chèvrefeuille18 May 2017 at 10:05

    Both continuations are awesome, both very spiritual, but I think the first completes the Tan Renga in a great way full of spirituality.

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