I ... entered the poem of life, whose purpose is ... simply to witness the beauties of the world, to discover the many forms that love can take. (Barabara Blackman in 'Glass After Glass')

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24 May 2017

Ancient Road – tan renga

ancient road…
the trails of the masters
absorbed in fallen leaves                            © Adjei Agyei-Baah

thickening over the years
rarely disturbed by new feet                 © Rosemary Nissen-Wade

or:
     
the road climbing higher
towards the mountaintop                          © Rosemary Nissen-Wade


For Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge 2017 #15

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7 comments:

  1. Kim M. Russell24 May 2017 at 17:47

    We both wrote about feet, Rosemary!

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  2. Reading Pleasure24 May 2017 at 20:21

    A very nice completion.

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  3. Adas Alcove24 May 2017 at 21:02

    Nicely penned!

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  4. Chèvrefeuille25 May 2017 at 05:33

    For sure ... your second continuation is awesome and it's my favorite.

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  5. Anonymous25 May 2017 at 09:17

    Both are hope filled

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  6. Gillena Cox26 May 2017 at 00:45

    nice continuations Rosemary, luv the illusion of the second

    much love...

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  7. Anonymous28 May 2017 at 08:57

    I like both completions.

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