Because you are music,
I sing you, even
when you aren't here,
softly in memory.
Because you are wine,
you intoxicate me
slowly and smoothly,
the taste lingering.
Because you are ocean,
I bathe in you, plunge
and almost drown, then float
on your buoyant blue.
Because you are poetry,
I return to you again and again;
you fill my mouth,
I give you utterance, but –
Because you are mystery,
I cannot touch your core,
fathom your depths, recover
from you, find your truest chords.
from you, find your truest chords.
Written in response to Literary Excursions: human in terms of non-human
at 'imaginary garden with real toads'.
Each stanza offers new insight into the 'you' being described. My favourite comparison is:
ReplyDeleteBecause you are poetry,
I return to you again and again;
you fill my mouth,
I give you utterance...
So sensual, each stanza awakening a need. Beautiful!
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ReplyDeleteWill add this link to my list of favourites.
Much love...
This is by far the most gorgeous piece of writing I have ever read!!❤️
ReplyDeleteHigh praise, Sanaa, knowing how well-read you are in poetry. Thank you!
DeleteAbsolutely magical. I love it.
ReplyDeleteWow wow wow!
ReplyDeleteEach "because" holds back just enough (to make a wonderful...)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely lovely one. Not one word too few or too many. Metaphore enshrined
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ReplyDeleteRosemay, one of my favorites of yours ~
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