Once was a boat that was called after me,
named as the Mary Rose,
tiny but strong to fish in the sea.
How the wind blows, who knows?
Once I was small, lived on an isle;
Dad called me Mary Rose –
his special name, making me smile.
Who knows what stays, what goes?
When I grew up, then I could see
feet made of clay, not gold.
Gone was my god, gone from that day –
old stories long grown cold.
Jack was my new step-father who
old stories long grown cold.
Jack was my new step-father who
never usurped that name,
yet built a boat, showing me true
new ways that love became.
Once was a boat that was called after me,
named as the Mary Rose,
tiny but strong to fish in the sea.
tiny but strong to fish in the sea.
How the wind blows, who knows?
And no, you are NOT allowed to call me Mary Rose! Seriously. The only other person who did was my favourite uncle, Tommy, who died in his nineties a few years back and who doesn't belong in this poem. It's a special name, not for general use, not even by best friends, lovers or husbands.
And no, you are NOT allowed to call me Mary Rose! Seriously. The only other person who did was my favourite uncle, Tommy, who died in his nineties a few years back and who doesn't belong in this poem. It's a special name, not for general use, not even by best friends, lovers or husbands.
(I don't have a photo of the Mary Rose but she was something like this, with a pointier bow. This is from the Antique Boat Centre. As the image is marked as available to be saved, I am assuming Public Domain.)
At 'imaginary garden with real toads' Kim's weekend mini challenge is Boats, and she quotes many people's favourite boat song – certainly mine – The Skye Boat Song. Check out the link to find more boat poems.
I grew up on an island, often 'messing about in boats', and was later married for 27 years to a professional fisherman, so had many possibilities to write about ... but perhaps we all have one boat that is more special than others.
I grew up on an island, often 'messing about in boats', and was later married for 27 years to a professional fisherman, so had many possibilities to write about ... but perhaps we all have one boat that is more special than others.
The name of a boat is so special and to be that person is a special sign.. I think this poem should be sung,
ReplyDeleteWell, I did copy the metre of Skye Boat song exactly! (Smile.)
DeleteWonderful, Rosemary. I love your father's special name for you.
ReplyDeleteWhat an honour, to have a boat named after you, Rosemary - and your dad's special name for you, too!
ReplyDeleteI can feel the sadness in the stanza:
'When I grew up, then I could see
feet made of clay, not gold.
Gone was my god, gone from that day –
old stories long grown cold'.
There is also strength in the lines:
'...built a boat, showing me true
new ways that love became'.
Thanks, Kim. I hope I made it clear enough that, although my stepfather never addressed me by my Dad's pet name for me, which would have been presumptuous, he gave it to the boat he built. (My Dad didn't build boats.)
DeleteA story of love and of life all wrapped up in a wee boat.Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteWell, since I can't call you Mary Rose, I will just have to call you Sexy.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, I think it's very curious that my father calls me Magaly MarĂa.
Happy to be called Sexy. Thank you.
DeleteMagaly Maria is very musical!
thank you for this enchanting poem. What a lovely gift/message.
ReplyDeleteOh Rosemary this is so touching and lovely! Thank you for your kind words over at my blog.
ReplyDeleteIt is a special feeling to have boat named after you. I actually read the poem as sing song way
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