Thank you, I like him fine.
Buffalo Bill will never
not be handsome now,
and his prowess won’t deteriorate.
And when I give him back
to the cradling earth again
– for I don’t get to keep them, you know –
dressed in a new body and sporting a new name
perhaps you’ll meet him once more, in a different dream
… unless it is you I am holding then.
Unless it is you I lead by the hand
to your new, true awakening….
to your new, true awakening….
At "imaginary garden with real toads" Brendan asks us to "dance with a ghost", i.e. to respond to another poem. (Well no, it was to play tennis, but I prefer to dance.) The original e. e. cummings poem is one of my favourites – and hey, if someone's "defunct", they're really a ghost! (I have read the cummings poem bitterly in the past, identifying with the questioner. So in a way I am here talking to myself, using Death's voice to persuade myself of a different, kinder perspective.)
The "different dream" is an allusion to the final passage of Kahlil Gibran's The Prophet, and in Death leading one by the hand I was recalling Sir Terry Pratchett's lovely posthumous tweet (involving his fictional character, Death).
This is as balletic as ghost-tennis gets, Rosemary! You picked such a silver original to answer to. Turning elegy into transformation. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteThis is such an incredibly powerful response, Rosemary!💞 The idea of 'a new, true awakening' gives me much to chew upon!💞
ReplyDeleteI really like the death here... I feel that he respond to the bitterness in cummings poem.
ReplyDeleteFantastic response, evoking the reincarnate soul. Brilliant stuff.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting meld of muses
ReplyDeleteMuch💝love
So absolutely gorgeous!sigh.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely, gave me chills
ReplyDeleteYes, I like the voice of death in this one. Death always brings anger in some manner. I haven't always dealt well with that part of it.
ReplyDeleteChilling response to dealing with the notion of death. Well said, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteHmmm, wasn't conceived of as chilling. Maybe it depends on one's attitude to death.
DeleteI don't often say this, but... I wish I had written that title. Delicious!
ReplyDeleteWonderful, isn't it? But cummings wrote it first, albeit as a line, not a title.
Delete