I got up early
just before dawn;
just before dawn;
turned the volume loud,
put the music on.
"Amazing Grace!"
All on my own,
I danced and sang
to the rising sun.
Although from birth
we wake to fear,
finding my path
brought a joyous morn —
finding my path
brought a joyous morn —
A flood to drown
fear of pain, fear of death.
P.S. This happened in 1988. I have been a Reiki Master since 1992.
P.S. This happened in 1988. I have been a Reiki Master since 1992.
Submitted for Poetic Asides bref double challenge and to dVerse's
Those Pesky Questions: Describe a morning you woke without fear.
Those Pesky Questions: Describe a morning you woke without fear.
music is so freeing... so is dancing like no one is around... smiles
ReplyDeleteI. Love. This.Poem. I can see you dancing for joy.
ReplyDeleteI love the dancing and singing to the rising sun ~
ReplyDeleteJust a question though, is the last line supposed to be:
free of pain, free of death
Have a wonderful week ~
No,Grace, though I take the point. :) The idea is that the flood of joy drowns those human fears.
Deletesounds like you are in a good place.
ReplyDeleteamazing grace is def a song to rock out to....smiles...my fav version is punkrock and bagpipes...a very unique version...
ReplyDeleteand i would say joy does drown out those fears.
Wonderful sentiment Rosemary...and yes, dance as if no-one's watching...sing as if no-one's listening...I agree with bw...it does sound like you're in a good place.
ReplyDeleteWell I was in a good one that morning in 1988, anyway. *Smiles.* (And not in a bad one now.)
Deletelove the means to reach joy...a beautiful write :)
ReplyDeleteWaking up and taking a firm decision - I can really see how this new road removed that itchy fear we learn to have.
ReplyDelete...it's brave of you to do...it takes some shedding of fear just to decide to dance with abandonment by yourself...one would not think so, but it's not easy for some...cool poem
ReplyDeleteBeautiful spirit you have, Rosemary... and a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you remember that morning and that decision so clearly... It must have been a very powerful moment.
ReplyDeleteYes, Marina — life-changing. And blissful.
DeleteI love the vision of you starting the day that way, Rosemary. Uplifting!
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