All week he’s been full
of passion and play.
Tonight his back hurts.
I go out to see the moon
but it’s still a wet Spring —
she’s cloud-hidden again.
But I can write poems
in the fertile season,
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A respite from the week of passion is a welcome change to give time for some poetry! Great verse!
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Thanks, Hank, :)
ReplyDeleteThe last two stanzas are so so beautiful...
ReplyDeletelove your witty words. smiles.
ReplyDeletewelcome sharing a free verse with poets rally today.
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I love the play on words; clever~
ReplyDelete"I can write poems in this fertile season..." Indeed, Rosemary, you can! Lovely. Amy
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Thank you, dear Amy. And you too, Ella, PP and Morning.
ReplyDeleteSo nice to know you are enjoying spring, as winter creeps upon us over here! I love the "cloud-hidden" moon!
ReplyDeleteI like the lightness about this - taking what is and accepting it as perfect.The clouds for me acted as symbols of one choice you could have made - to be miserable - but you chose poetry instead, and we all know how good that makes us feel!! Poetry, one of the world's best lovers.
ReplyDelete@Sherry, yes — somewhere in the world it's warm!
ReplyDelete@brokenpenwriter yes indeed, and my enduring passion!
Re-directed passion? Hm... now there's a thought! LOL
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