There’s nothing now that I can do for you,
and how it hurts my heart that this is so.
My sky has darkened from its sunny blue
as I discern that yours is thick with snow.
I always held to what I knew was true –
only to wonder now if I did know.
We were each other’s shelters once; that’s gone.
Like swords: the cutting rain, the piercing sun.
Like swords: the cutting rain, the piercing sun.
A combined ottava rima / ghazal, for the Poetic Asides ottava rima challenge. (Or rather, a quasi-ghazal – since, among other things not present here, a ghazal should have at least five couplets ... whereas an ottava rima cannot have so many.)
Beautiful. Just because things change doesn't mean they weren't true once. Don'y doubt it!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Rosemary. Especially poignant, those closing lines.
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