She gets it wrong sometimes, my little cat,
although she reads my mind with perfect ease.
Like, once I found a feather at my door;
a friend said my late husband left it there,
a sign of love from Spirit — I was glad
to think he might have left me such a token.
She must have thought that if a single token
so gladdened me, then she, efficient cat,
could find a gift to make me tenfold glad —
and she could manage that with feline ease
as soon as opportunity was there.
Next day I found a whole bird at my door.
Oh, I was ill at ease and far from glad
to find it there, that corpse outside my door!
Yet it betokened all her love ... dear cat.
This mini-sestina form is the brain-child of Australian poet Myron Lysenko,
though he suspects he is not the first to make such an adaptation.
This poem is submitted for Poets United's Poetry Pantry #141
This mini-sestina form is the brain-child of Australian poet Myron Lysenko,
though he suspects he is not the first to make such an adaptation.
This poem is submitted for Poets United's Poetry Pantry #141
Ah! And the moment is now immortalized.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Rosemary.
Yes, an absolutely true story. Glad you enjoyed the telling. :)
DeleteOur cat brings in gifts too - birds, mice, shrews. Yoiks! Loved your sweet poem, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteYes, they mean so well. :(
Deleteha! :) Her heart was in the right place!
ReplyDeleteThe feather was a very touching gesture.....the body of the bird not so much! At least she didn't drag it into the house...LOL.
ReplyDeleteNo, but she did bring in a slaughtered gecko a day or so later. :(
Deletesmiles...my cat has left me similar treasures...i like that you attribute it to her heart for you...my cat is def loving...smiles.
ReplyDeleteCat experts say it is their way of trying to teach us to hunt - inept creatures that we appear to them.
DeleteWell, cats & poetry...love them both. I love this!
ReplyDeletewow, your cat can certainly read your mind. though there might be a little problem with the booty. :)
ReplyDeleteenjoyed the read.
I have seen variations on sestina before, but i like this one. The repetitions do not become forced. Love your tale of kitty love.
ReplyDeleteIt was still hard to work them in, even so. I'm glad they don;t appear forced. :)
DeleteA mini-sestina... what a pleasurable read. You deftly convey a string of common occurrences in a completely new way. And it is lovely.
ReplyDeleteOnce I saw Myron talking about this form in his facebook page, I had to give it a try! You know how it is. :-D
Deletethis was fun.reminded me of tweety and the cat.
ReplyDeleteIt's a clever cat with warmth! The feather was ok but the bird carcass, a bit morbid. The love feelings that prompted it saved the day. Nicely Rosemary!
ReplyDeleteHank
Love comes in so many guises. Really like the form and how it flows. Thank you,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Oh, this made me laugh! Marvelous work!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. It was fun to write.
ReplyDeletePurr-fectly pleasurable.
ReplyDeleteRosemary, thank you for your lovely comment about me at Poets United. I am still blushing from all the nice things folks said about me.
ReplyDeleteI grew up in the country and once in a while, our cat Sadie would meow like her mouth was full... and it usually was. She was a mouser, ratter, rabbiter (sad), and of course, a birder. We'd all go out and pet her and say, "What a smart kitty," etc., and get her treats, while one person stayed behind, rubber gloved, to pick up the "trinket" and fling it into the "back forty"!
Thanks for conjuring a nice memory. Peace, Amy
The thought of mini - sestina is very nice. The full 39 lines can be Sisyphean both to write and to read. Loved the story of the little cat.
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