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16 September 2009


Nah – I realise I REALLY don't like initial capitals for every line of my poems. Some people make it work, but it doesn't suit all the things I want to do with verse. I'm going to go back and put right all the (few) pieces I did that way.


  1. I wouldn't have said anything if you'd kept them in (because I know there are two camps on this), but I agree with you really. They can work, but I think unless you have a really good reason for using them, they're just arbitrary.

  2. The really good reason was that computer formatting seldom allows one to indent if a line goes beyond the page/window width. But I think people get it anyway. And I changed the template for a wider column - which has other disadvantages, sorry: slower to load.

    It comes down in the end to what one likes, doesn't it? Author's choice.

    Interestingly, I found I was beginning to write in a different way when having initial capitals in mind at the outset, and a couple of pieces would actually have worked better if I'd left them like that. But it's an infinitesimal thing, and I opted for consistency. Most of the time, I DIDN'T have it in mind; my head was still where it was used to being and I would have to go through and capitalise later.

    In the end, I just experienced then as too restrictive.

  3. Ah, I see. Your reasoning that is. I think you're right - it mostly just comes down to preference. But yes, I also find it restrictive.