one magpie
the gurgle of a stream
over stones
no traffic
along the winding road
trees close in
***
winter sun
the hills across the way
hazy grey
3/7/15
gurgling rain –
waxing crescent
six days old
***
waxing moon
rain gurgling
all night
22/7/15
roses –
dark shadows
on the wall
24/7/15
black-topped
mountainous clouds –
bare trees
These are great. I like how you keep them nice and tight. I miss magpies...in a way. These birds do not live in my current part of the world.
ReplyDeleteeach one precious on its own
ReplyDeletehave a good Tuesday
sunlight streaming -
through patches of silence
vehicles roar
much love...
You had me at the magpie as a gurgling stream.
ReplyDeleteLovely, Rosemary, a real feel of landscape and atmosphere. K.
ReplyDeleteAll the different hues of magpies brought under on place!! beautiful....
ReplyDeletePS" Thanks a lot for your comment on my poem : To the stars"....... i rectified the mistakes!!
You have made a wonderful collection of haiku to mark the passing of a season on the month of July.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a gorgeous collection :D
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned!
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Very wonderful. I envy you the rain!!!!! Our rainforest is like a desert this year, not good.
ReplyDeleteI'm not a haiku fan, Rosemary, but i wanted to drop by and tell you that I don't agree with La Bruyere either, but it suited the poem. :-)
ReplyDeleteIt did indeed! (And I know you're not keen on haiku.)
DeleteThis is a nice project haiku string, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteI forget your seasons are opposite ours. You wonderfully are telling how things shut down for winter.
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Looks like the dictionary can si beside my lonesome red covered1980's W. Collegiate dictionary.
ReplyDeleteThese are lovely, small snapshots with big import. Refreshing to read them from the heat here.
ReplyDeleteThese are all lovely and soothing
ReplyDeletevery nice. there's a natural magic in the first one that i can't quite put my finger on, and the six-day-old moon made my heart swell.
ReplyDeleteOh, thank you! That's EXACTLY what I want my haiku to be and do.
DeleteSeasonal haiku...very nice. Like the constant rain and dark shadows of the roses.
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