In Peru
the blue of his eyes
had the women twittering.
“So handsome!” they told me.
(I already knew.)
I, of course, was gazing
(discreetly) into
the deep brown eyes
of slim, black-haired men
with knife-edge cheekbones.
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In Bali
the locals feasted their eyes
on our fair-faced, fair-haired boys
(they were pre-schoolers then)
with clucks of admiring joy.
Their father and I
couldn’t pull our gaze
from the quick, dark local children,
their golden skin, black hair
and bright black, dazzling eyes.
April Poem A Day Challenge 2014, day 19: a colour poem
ah, beauty. it's to be viewed and admired. :)
ReplyDeleteYes ... and we differ as to what seems exotic. :)
DeleteYou've written a perfect poem...
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DeleteThank you.
The parentheses say it all!!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you 'got' that! :)
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