tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post8838784843785001235..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): Paradelle of Love in the MorningRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-67553491658807369012014-08-09T10:34:48.386+10:002014-08-09T10:34:48.386+10:00Very sweet and romantic ~Very sweet and romantic ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-51249026679905827332014-08-03T19:33:53.290+10:002014-08-03T19:33:53.290+10:00Pleases me too
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me too...Pleases me too<br />two it pleases<br />me too...Rob Schacknehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472139702551957034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-86406464638826616922014-08-03T08:16:20.250+10:002014-08-03T08:16:20.250+10:00I was impressed at how many people wrote really go...I was impressed at how many people wrote really good poems from this exercise.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-55743163540045592382014-08-03T08:15:34.037+10:002014-08-03T08:15:34.037+10:00Delighted, dear people, that it pleased you all.Delighted, dear people, that it pleased you all.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-48262356878706236302014-08-03T07:05:23.872+10:002014-08-03T07:05:23.872+10:00ooh, I like this. it flows quite nicely and comes...ooh, I like this. it flows quite nicely and comes together beautifully in the last stanza. I particularly like the line "Hold me in your new."RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-86866805543485785292014-08-03T04:24:49.065+10:002014-08-03T04:24:49.065+10:00I agree with Myrna that you wrote a very delicate ...I agree with Myrna that you wrote a very delicate poem, Rosemary. Very well-done!Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-69036847695059136762014-08-03T02:34:17.863+10:002014-08-03T02:34:17.863+10:00The short lines simplify the big challenge of stan...The short lines simplify the big challenge of stanza 4. I agree with Brian; those of us who wrote longer, more complex lines ended up with a full page of words<br />to fill our check off list. Actually, as much fun as this faux form was, maybe we should make up more of them. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-46682726396277827592014-08-02T12:29:05.027+10:002014-08-02T12:29:05.027+10:00You did right in making it simple. It is easier to...You did right in making it simple. It is easier to be in control and the result is perfect. Great write Rosemary!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-83804676693204099882014-08-02T08:57:28.461+10:002014-08-02T08:57:28.461+10:00Nice poem. I especially like the last line.Nice poem. I especially like the last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-85867120333423466122014-08-02T07:10:17.160+10:002014-08-02T07:10:17.160+10:00*smile* Your last verse shows an obvious need for ...*smile* Your last verse shows an obvious need for substantives! Substantives are not so bad. *smile* If we can "stir daylight awake", they are funny. :-)Vacciniushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631121664181976045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-3021575752086812632014-08-02T07:09:43.724+10:002014-08-02T07:09:43.724+10:00Such sweet and gentle words you make out of it.Such sweet and gentle words you make out of it.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-58338977860098303002014-08-02T06:05:28.969+10:002014-08-02T06:05:28.969+10:00You made something so delicate out of what was mea...You made something so delicate out of what was meant to be a joke. Very lovely.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-56719420417255608242014-08-02T04:52:12.105+10:002014-08-02T04:52:12.105+10:00So beautiful - loved ' we stir and awake when ...So beautiful - loved ' we stir and awake when new in daylight.' KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-59247100893794156712014-08-02T04:50:31.238+10:002014-08-02T04:50:31.238+10:00Excellent! This flows well....and so naturally. ...Excellent! This flows well....and so naturally. The paradelle form pretty much gets lost in the poem! I like the idea of stirring daylight awake.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-58831183307824841902014-08-02T04:14:32.285+10:002014-08-02T04:14:32.285+10:00Love the morning, the rain and the gathering. Beau...Love the morning, the rain and the gathering. Beautiful, Rosemary.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-60059543611500769132014-08-01T22:48:49.942+10:002014-08-01T22:48:49.942+10:00"we stir and awake when / new in daylight.&qu..."we stir and awake when / new in daylight."...i love these lines...each day a new life....<br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-13250165165957573312014-08-01T22:23:24.270+10:002014-08-01T22:23:24.270+10:00when we stir daylight awake, and we rose...those a...when we stir daylight awake, and we rose...those are cool lines...and the rest flutters along nicely..i think part of the trick to pulling it off is not getting complex...its almost as if the more you try to show off...the faster the quicksand pulls you down...ha...well played rosemaryBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-10304554476481151392014-08-01T21:57:55.579+10:002014-08-01T21:57:55.579+10:00so cool each morning can be a fresh startso cool each morning can be a fresh startWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-11772397927658582582014-08-01T20:36:18.798+10:002014-08-01T20:36:18.798+10:00Love the two final lines :)Love the two final lines :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-27359495505322054742014-08-01T18:48:25.216+10:002014-08-01T18:48:25.216+10:00Ha! I was thinking I should have given myself long...Ha! I was thinking I should have given myself longer, more complex lines to play with. :)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-10649867926977093002014-08-01T18:42:44.629+10:002014-08-01T18:42:44.629+10:00I think I should have kept to simple... this works...I think I should have kept to simple... this works well.Roslyn Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15700960108357035957noreply@blogger.com