tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post5603130149797575344..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): Go or Stay?Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-36006077881166116162015-05-12T14:04:37.549+10:002015-05-12T14:04:37.549+10:00"You, though, do all things
to make others bl..."You, though, do all things<br />to make others bloom into joy."<br />This is someone I wish I could be.<br />Such a lovely piece.<br /><br /><br />Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-36376194003397643332015-05-12T02:53:29.759+10:002015-05-12T02:53:29.759+10:00Oh wow...Rosemary!! There's so much to gain in...Oh wow...Rosemary!! There's so much to gain in insights from this poem...the closing reminds me of the Rumi piece With That Moon Language...profound work indeed!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-45838411070417570352015-05-11T14:32:17.322+10:002015-05-11T14:32:17.322+10:00stellar ~stellar ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-10183907494147489942015-05-11T14:18:58.388+10:002015-05-11T14:18:58.388+10:00It works that way. Mostly just to have some compa...It works that way. Mostly just to have some compatible company. I am glad for you.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-40504396012298733042015-05-11T06:25:24.465+10:002015-05-11T06:25:24.465+10:00You have succeeded in droves, Rosemary. I feel thi...You have succeeded in droves, Rosemary. I feel this is completely in keeping with Jane's style...you've captured that essence of feeling that she has in her writing...that inexplicable quality that moves the heart with feeling. Really beautiful write here.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-17969096564127333922015-05-11T02:29:19.146+10:002015-05-11T02:29:19.146+10:00Interesting, you always challenge my imagination (...Interesting, you always challenge my imagination (creatively). Thanks :-)<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-89780810148733666582015-05-11T00:08:55.917+10:002015-05-11T00:08:55.917+10:00This is just a lovely poem, Rosemary--it makes me ...This is just a lovely poem, Rosemary--it makes me think of loss actually--in a poignant and beautiful way. Thanks. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-17405497649825651282015-05-10T23:45:21.294+10:002015-05-10T23:45:21.294+10:00The simplicity of these almost-statements that tur...The simplicity of these almost-statements that turn into a sort of allegory gives a dream feel to a message that is quite real.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-56644689769968451782015-05-10T23:42:14.506+10:002015-05-10T23:42:14.506+10:00I shall be full of the noises
of other people: cac...I shall be full of the noises<br />of other people: cacophony<br />of trying to be happy<br />away from the silence of being.<br /><br />Rosemary this speaks to me with a megaphone. This is where I live but the ending is one I am learning to serve. This is so eloquent in its simplicityDebi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-83864735401160631542015-05-10T17:02:05.991+10:002015-05-10T17:02:05.991+10:00Dear Jim, you may have found an oxymoron, but I di...Dear Jim, you may have found an oxymoron, but I didn't find a guy! I did go out with a dear friend, a woman even older than me, because I knew it would please her and she does a lot for me and others. Reward: I had a great time!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-25226479982981661382015-05-10T16:13:18.418+10:002015-05-10T16:13:18.418+10:00I really love the ending, such a wonderful ending,...I really love the ending, such a wonderful ending, the use of silence and noise as contrasts is very efficient too.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-65376419445422287642015-05-10T15:03:01.541+10:002015-05-10T15:03:01.541+10:00Joyful cacophony. That's powerful, the guy you...Joyful cacophony. That's powerful, the guy you found. <br />Nice Rosemary. It was there, I swear I found it. A lovely oxymoron. <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-87523181268815857732015-05-10T12:57:58.846+10:002015-05-10T12:57:58.846+10:00"cacophony of other people" and those la..."cacophony of other people" and those last two lines are superb. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-87553529413056969652015-05-10T12:55:16.948+10:002015-05-10T12:55:16.948+10:00Oh, how i love this! I resonate with "the sil...Oh, how i love this! I resonate with "the silence of being", and applaud that you will go to meet the person "as if carrying roses". Brilliant.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-47776069022720783452015-05-10T12:06:12.915+10:002015-05-10T12:06:12.915+10:00I love the ending lines - simple yet full of joy:
...I love the ending lines - simple yet full of joy:<br /><br />You, though, do all things<br />to make others bloom into joy.<br /><br />I shall go to meet you,<br />as if carrying roses.<br /><br />Thanks for participating & wishing you happy weekend ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-43521163605278890332015-05-10T10:20:35.715+10:002015-05-10T10:20:35.715+10:00Oh yes, certainly it is Rosemary! And there are lo...Oh yes, certainly it is Rosemary! And there are lots of other things that carry weight in sharing one's loneliness! Wonderful thoughts!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-24682711200427705412015-05-10T08:38:00.237+10:002015-05-10T08:38:00.237+10:00This is a gorgeous poem.. loved the soothing effec...This is a gorgeous poem.. loved the soothing effect of the lines... <br />Beautifully penned..! :D<br />Lots of love<br />xoxoSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.com