tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post5044681276021450216..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): Views from the TrainRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-43206243168154962322016-03-08T16:23:18.244+11:002016-03-08T16:23:18.244+11:00TRain to lonEly
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fa...TRain to lonEly<br />kNows no trees<br />oF Love.. Leaves<br />fall away<br />from whistles<br />refRain of Kindness...<br /><br />TRain tracks<br />sEnd<br />melancholy rAils..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-23718626493990867612016-03-03T10:26:14.841+11:002016-03-03T10:26:14.841+11:00"Yet birds rise" is a fantastic line to ..."Yet birds rise" is a fantastic line to go with a great haibun!Carol Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09366366047409134966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-88033182662006280012016-03-03T07:28:05.858+11:002016-03-03T07:28:05.858+11:00yet birds rise... survival is possible.... :) yet birds rise... survival is possible.... :) Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-56350748518094395282016-03-03T01:53:06.349+11:002016-03-03T01:53:06.349+11:00I'm with Grace, I want to know more about this...I'm with Grace, I want to know more about this girl and how the experience affected her life. The rattling of that train (and her description of the father's wife) tells so many tales...Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-73981488198342436392016-03-02T22:17:18.544+11:002016-03-02T22:17:18.544+11:00Yes, I will write them, Grace, but not in poetry.Yes, I will write them, Grace, but not in poetry.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-1832231619599512352016-03-02T12:14:39.597+11:002016-03-02T12:14:39.597+11:00This begs a story and backstory Rosemary ~ Love t...This begs a story and backstory Rosemary ~ Love the sounds of the trains and the family characters awaiting at the end ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-56304422132694493142016-03-02T08:46:45.918+11:002016-03-02T08:46:45.918+11:00I'm in my glory reading today. I am enchanted ...I'm in my glory reading today. I am enchanted by train travel, and this is a different look at it. Sometimes undesirable destinations mar our journey, Rosemary!Walter J. Wojtanikhttp://wojisme.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-36573859454843779432016-03-02T07:52:58.486+11:002016-03-02T07:52:58.486+11:00Yes, there were some compensations.Yes, there were some compensations.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-88735024561105796812016-03-02T07:52:10.912+11:002016-03-02T07:52:10.912+11:00No love there, from either side!No love there, from either side!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-64397357751411061502016-03-02T07:41:05.685+11:002016-03-02T07:41:05.685+11:00The haiku is such a rewarding, positive fuelled en...The haiku is such a rewarding, positive fuelled ending!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-23801507940773423842016-03-02T05:46:41.882+11:002016-03-02T05:46:41.882+11:00So often a journey is marred with thoughts of who ...So often a journey is marred with thoughts of who we might meet at the destination... not always nice to have someone new coming into our lives.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-67954243490844864712016-03-02T04:38:48.381+11:002016-03-02T04:38:48.381+11:00Wow, I can SEE that scornful smile. Yoiks. Love th...Wow, I can SEE that scornful smile. Yoiks. Love the haibun, Rosemary, especially the haiku. Thank heaven for nature, when humans disappoint.I am thankful for the rising birds....and spirits!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-49959514297529614652016-03-02T02:58:44.131+11:002016-03-02T02:58:44.131+11:00Enjoyed the festering love for Step Mom.Enjoyed the festering love for Step Mom.Ron Kleimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15031436361071946718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-3142553169660074102016-03-01T23:04:59.479+11:002016-03-01T23:04:59.479+11:00Now, that's what I call a *real* journey, Rose...Now, that's what I call a *real* journey, Rosemary. Miskyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10280369979543928659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-80435586479808728422016-03-01T23:01:40.478+11:002016-03-01T23:01:40.478+11:00Aah a tough destination that, but the haiku is fil...Aah a tough destination that, but the haiku is filled with positivity in the end! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com