tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post4160727070749170900..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): Fairy-tale AbyssRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-79307385040226577202016-02-20T01:22:07.981+11:002016-02-20T01:22:07.981+11:00Many things to think of--the stereotypical farm-bo...Many things to think of--the stereotypical farm-boy physical characteristics of the young man posturing as "the ideal of a mystic warrior"; the merging of the Aikido philosophy of defending the attacker with his comment, "You are my animus"; the perceived idealistic, intellectual relationship and its deterioration(further complicated by the added element of the age difference). A thought-provoking piece, would like to read more. vb holmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18042714310345407971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-6972343569687202992016-02-18T17:01:51.348+11:002016-02-18T17:01:51.348+11:00i find.. with zero
worries and
100%
belief
magic
i...i find.. with zero<br />worries and<br />100%<br />belief<br />magic<br />iS real<br />no iFs ands<br />or buts wrOng...<br /><br />Moving..<br />connecting..<br />creating.. practice..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-55519489472612945932016-02-18T02:59:51.127+11:002016-02-18T02:59:51.127+11:00We were left with a
question: What is real?
One ...We were left with a <br />question: What is real?<br /><br />One is often misled to think if it is good it will remain so. The opposite can shock many to be more wary!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-54534952253387126662016-02-18T02:23:40.492+11:002016-02-18T02:23:40.492+11:00This is so good, Rosemary. I adore the descriptio...This is so good, Rosemary. I adore the description in the first paragraph.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-30016516652523157852016-02-17T23:53:04.880+11:002016-02-17T23:53:04.880+11:00I like the image of the details of our lives clutt...I like the image of the details of our lives cluttering the pure space... Sadly yearning...Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-30031175510011614412016-02-17T15:21:01.542+11:002016-02-17T15:21:01.542+11:00I can feel the longing for what was, and the loss ...I can feel the longing for what was, and the loss Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-77089266216016232422016-02-17T12:09:30.320+11:002016-02-17T12:09:30.320+11:00There is mystery here and a hint of 'becoming&...There is mystery here and a hint of 'becoming'debihttps://debispoems.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-91102320425098301112016-02-17T10:44:14.224+11:002016-02-17T10:44:14.224+11:00Intriguing development of the experience of Lorenz...Intriguing development of the experience of Lorenzo through differing literary interpretations. Suited to this haibun I feel. Moving from previous detailed factual narrative to tightened prose to the essence.Linda Stevensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12826064420206218439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-67155196540858591152016-02-17T07:50:49.098+11:002016-02-17T07:50:49.098+11:00I love the blurring of lines between dimensions in...I love the blurring of lines between dimensions in this, Rosemary, for, surely, that is just how life is.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-82900100149778750112016-02-17T06:05:19.314+11:002016-02-17T06:05:19.314+11:00enjoyable read.
ZQenjoyable read.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-28108272969746400822016-02-17T03:55:50.150+11:002016-02-17T03:55:50.150+11:00This feels like a fine and shimmering remembering....This feels like a fine and shimmering remembering. Some connections are that pure, and outside of time. But as your poem notes, real life imperceptibly begins to intrude. Sigh. Beautifully vivid descriptions in this one, my friend. Our lives lack no shortage of material, LOL.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-67237613603132508332016-02-17T02:40:35.009+11:002016-02-17T02:40:35.009+11:00Sometimes after a while what once seemed a good th...Sometimes after a while what once seemed a good thing shows its other side and when that fine connecting thread grows imperceptible it becomes obvious that the fairy tale has come to an end. I find myself thinking that there must be truth in this! Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-33657211930856600452016-02-17T01:32:05.344+11:002016-02-17T01:32:05.344+11:00Pure space vs. detail. I get a sense that in cert...Pure space vs. detail. I get a sense that in certain meditative states we could revisit the animus if we wish. In another spiral of time and wisdom.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-20485335589362533772016-02-17T01:27:18.593+11:002016-02-17T01:27:18.593+11:00This gave a deep sense of mystery to me... almost ...This gave a deep sense of mystery to me... almost ghostly... I wonder about the sword and the young warrior(?) and the connection. Maybe we all have a twin soul somewhere inside that we can talk too... but maybe we are just to close to the abyss to dare.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-61811379258142003012016-02-17T00:48:09.321+11:002016-02-17T00:48:09.321+11:00It's a nice dream or fantasy but there is line...It's a nice dream or fantasy but there is line to draw as we live in our own reality ~ I specially like this line: Under the clutter of fact and time, our fine connecting thread grew imperceptible even to ourselves. <br /><br />The haiku makes me think of ghostly stuff ~ Thanks for joining us at Haibun Monday Rosemary and wishing you a happy week ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com