tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post217100399419098179..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): FictionsRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-85367929238172911512016-09-07T07:08:41.598+10:002016-09-07T07:08:41.598+10:00Ha. I actually think I prefer the first - there&#...Ha. I actually think I prefer the first - there's something more candid and straightforward about it, and a bit of a surprise. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-46376353195933978302016-09-06T04:20:17.045+10:002016-09-06T04:20:17.045+10:00I think I prefer this one, Rosemary...........smil...I think I prefer this one, Rosemary...........smiled at the four years of thwarted passion. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-65911628188517813172016-09-05T18:34:30.083+10:002016-09-05T18:34:30.083+10:00One is led by wonderful memories that gets rekindl...One is led by wonderful memories that gets rekindled upon reading novels of different titles. Great feelings in just so many words, Rosemary!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-65229043524214398902016-09-05T13:52:19.544+10:002016-09-05T13:52:19.544+10:00The second one also changes the meaning in a few p...The second one also changes the meaning in a few places, e.g. my cat is not actually named Art, lol. Hence the title.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-91078313249018932462016-09-05T12:11:35.880+10:002016-09-05T12:11:35.880+10:00Very familiar, Rosemary. I like both versions. T...Very familiar, Rosemary. I like both versions. The first was an excellent blow by blow accounting of the events leading up to the 'desire' release. The second one told of the desire and then showed how it developed. First gets my vote, slim margin.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-20895132362016766402016-09-05T11:47:52.743+10:002016-09-05T11:47:52.743+10:00I like them both, Rosemary but I do prefer the fir...I like them both, Rosemary but I do prefer the first one I think. I like the order of the sentences better. Regardless, they both are greatDebi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-91372884731413372322016-09-05T04:46:26.600+10:002016-09-05T04:46:26.600+10:00I agree with Kerry.. a wonderful rework..I agree with Kerry.. a wonderful rework..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-2659898667295057562016-09-05T02:32:30.587+10:002016-09-05T02:32:30.587+10:00Hurrah for a second spin at your awesome lines.. h...Hurrah for a second spin at your awesome lines.. hard to tell, but I think I like this one even better.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-15951224045169105682016-09-05T00:28:36.298+10:002016-09-05T00:28:36.298+10:00This is awesome. I really like your first stanza a...This is awesome. I really like your first stanza and your line breaks.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.com