tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post1637917634035193349..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): Sunday Morning, HomeRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-6056473637194079822016-09-09T07:05:19.326+10:002016-09-09T07:05:19.326+10:00Many thanks, Bekkie, for the kind words.
I actua...Many thanks, Bekkie, for the kind words. <br /><br />I actually emvisaged it as one haibun. When we do them for dVerse we are asked to keep them very concise, only one tight paragraph of prose and one closing haiku. Perhaps they think more would be unwieldy when people are expected to read so many at once. But that is an unusual restriction. Generally a haibun can be any length, with haiku dotted amongst the prose paragraphs. (As in Basho's famous journey.) Even this one is short compared with most.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-57666927097846530762016-09-09T02:53:51.075+10:002016-09-09T02:53:51.075+10:00Wonderful duel haibuns Rosemary! I like your attit...Wonderful duel haibuns Rosemary! I like your attitude about the neighbors music and your thoughts about where the airplanes are going. Cats often know more than we do about the going ons of the day!Bekkie Sanchezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16300001421561443693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-77113641870936073382016-09-08T14:43:02.911+10:002016-09-08T14:43:02.911+10:00Home, sounds come to visit. Life strong in its int...Home, sounds come to visit. Life strong in its introduction to a new daySusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-78801766758908842782016-09-08T13:08:46.814+10:002016-09-08T13:08:46.814+10:00Captured snapshots....Lovely.
Just as well your ne...Captured snapshots....Lovely.<br />Just as well your neighbours aren't Gilbert and Sullivan fans:)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-18019019321435528592016-09-08T07:49:56.383+10:002016-09-08T07:49:56.383+10:00The presence of the observer changes the experimen...The presence of the observer changes the experiment (er, poem)! :)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-58856733062881921772016-09-08T07:48:26.785+10:002016-09-08T07:48:26.785+10:00Oops, didn't intend that inference! LOLOops, didn't intend that inference! LOLRosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-65932496017349269972016-09-08T02:48:34.836+10:002016-09-08T02:48:34.836+10:00Lovely poem, lovely morning, special sounds for sp...Lovely poem, lovely morning, special sounds for special creatures. <br />That plane surely would take YOU over to Tasmania. I have been there, fed the roos, it's a lovely place. Sydney was not a slouch, just that the pace picked up a bit there.<br />The cat has hers as well. Follow that bird in flight, it'll go as far as kitty wishes.<br />..<br />Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-11424342204582801492016-09-08T02:24:35.839+10:002016-09-08T02:24:35.839+10:00Lots of sounds for a quiet Sunday!Lots of sounds for a quiet Sunday!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-31619604865713558802016-09-07T16:35:00.251+10:002016-09-07T16:35:00.251+10:00Sunday morning! The peace and quiet! Let others en...Sunday morning! The peace and quiet! Let others enjoy their music. One can get a little of the fun, why not?<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-91214641181258961442016-09-07T12:04:25.572+10:002016-09-07T12:04:25.572+10:00I also like the "war bling" hiding in yo...I also like the "war bling" hiding in your haiku.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-55526110577298956472016-09-07T12:03:31.002+10:002016-09-07T12:03:31.002+10:00"He keeps it soft, but nothing can muffle tha..."He keeps it soft, but nothing can muffle that beat. It picks up speed." ... This cracks me up, Missy. :)✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-25442251049633686962016-09-07T06:44:41.452+10:002016-09-07T06:44:41.452+10:00A lovely mix of prose and poetry, Rosemary -- of c...A lovely mix of prose and poetry, Rosemary -- of course I am drawn to your use of sounds and that cloudless, breathless Spring. And what a touch of sweetness to let your kitty come into the poem too. Thanks for sharing! Stacie Eirichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13889951415294858821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-3579456419097812182016-09-07T06:40:08.723+10:002016-09-07T06:40:08.723+10:00I can hear the heart lift of spring. Love the aler...I can hear the heart lift of spring. Love the alertness of Selena. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-24594978900850373872016-09-07T05:22:08.871+10:002016-09-07T05:22:08.871+10:00Aw yeah, I like this, it's like being inside y...Aw yeah, I like this, it's like being inside your mind :)Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-78758699631272344772016-09-07T03:36:57.518+10:002016-09-07T03:36:57.518+10:00I really like how you played with sounds... and th...I really like how you played with sounds... and there are days when both heavy metal and airplanes just enter my mind in just the right waybrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-81556974379445062582016-09-07T00:58:08.424+10:002016-09-07T00:58:08.424+10:00yeah oh yeah, this is a very very nice haibun
muc...yeah oh yeah, this is a very very nice haibun<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-12728722612886195072016-09-05T08:02:04.990+10:002016-09-05T08:02:04.990+10:00It is wonderful. Life and your depthIt is wonderful. Life and your depthAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-74723034594816262232016-09-05T00:01:53.944+10:002016-09-05T00:01:53.944+10:00Life moves on beautifully in this many-layered poe...Life moves on beautifully in this many-layered poem.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com