tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post8215288076639633225..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): Streams of ConsciousnessRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-43588732563142121472011-10-31T02:14:08.372+11:002011-10-31T02:14:08.372+11:00Thank you Mary. Yes, I think many people must slee...Thank you Mary. Yes, I think many people must sleep at least a little uneasily these days.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-55471939573647600152011-10-30T09:12:40.798+11:002011-10-30T09:12:40.798+11:00Beautiful. I like "the street rests unafraid...Beautiful. I like "the street rests unafraid." Interesting to think about streets that DO have fear. There are probably many that do in this age.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-46976485430707389182011-10-30T05:35:19.424+11:002011-10-30T05:35:19.424+11:00The picture you paint with your words has colour a...The picture you paint with your words has colour and clarity.<br />I love the simple stanza structure, it adds beautifully to the simplicity, and as you read the story slowly comes into sharp focus.<br />Wonderful!somewhereamelodyhttp://somewhereamelody.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-4735864720091092512011-10-30T02:58:23.633+11:002011-10-30T02:58:23.633+11:00Very well done--you took the prompt and made it yo...Very well done--you took the prompt and made it your own. Lovely. K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-39638396324753213802011-10-30T02:35:06.351+11:002011-10-30T02:35:06.351+11:00Very nicely done, I really enjoyed this poem.Very nicely done, I really enjoyed this poem.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-32541793771714663872011-10-30T02:20:52.568+11:002011-10-30T02:20:52.568+11:00It works for me... A lovely, thought-provoking pie...It works for me... A lovely, thought-provoking piece of writing, great example of conflation.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-83982669815868421352011-10-30T01:07:59.888+11:002011-10-30T01:07:59.888+11:00Yes, I think you pulled it off too. The difference...Yes, I think you pulled it off too. The difference between being told what is 'ladylike' and being free (as an adult then) to do as one pleases.<br />Very nice piece.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-50101001364198936272011-10-29T23:03:13.149+11:002011-10-29T23:03:13.149+11:00Certainly works Rosemary - very good.
Anna :o]Certainly works Rosemary - very good.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-92077345105427877662011-10-29T20:39:04.045+11:002011-10-29T20:39:04.045+11:00very nice job rosemary - i think you did wellvery nice job rosemary - i think you did wellClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-30196112720047386622011-10-29T17:11:18.301+11:002011-10-29T17:11:18.301+11:00"she had a language
of private gestures
quick..."she had a language<br />of private gestures<br />quick faces made" loved it, and this one too<br />"at night I gaze<br />from my vantage<br />the street rests unafraid"<br /><br />~MohanaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-67470592313440474892011-10-29T14:41:08.618+11:002011-10-29T14:41:08.618+11:00Thanks, guys. I'm so glad you feel it works. I...Thanks, guys. I'm so glad you feel it works. It's a technique I plan to use again, now that I've learned about it.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-20501233367812401462011-10-29T13:26:07.680+11:002011-10-29T13:26:07.680+11:00nice...i follow your threads through and definitel...nice...i follow your threads through and definitely see the difference...living under constraint, even well intentioned, i feel you...nicely done...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-65261896488699437962011-10-29T13:21:43.365+11:002011-10-29T13:21:43.365+11:00Yes, you did it. I read where they are in your poe...Yes, you did it. I read where they are in your poem. And, what a dandy of a poem it is. A very nice write.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-72174303950540067082011-10-29T11:28:53.760+11:002011-10-29T11:28:53.760+11:00I love this: "she had a language
of private g...I love this: "she had a language<br />of private gestures"<br /><br />arbitrarymeaning.blogspot.com✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.com