tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post5458871506796604866..comments2023-11-07T07:53:32.305+11:00Comments on The Passionate Crone (poetry): Streetlight, RainRosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-88665442459035394672017-04-18T14:03:28.739+10:002017-04-18T14:03:28.739+10:00Fantastic! You took the challenge and made a story...Fantastic! You took the challenge and made a story out of it.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-10860320386603484862017-04-17T18:19:37.249+10:002017-04-17T18:19:37.249+10:00Yours, though, cohered beautifully into a whole, i...Yours, though, cohered beautifully into a whole, indivisible poem! :)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-7001023764640503182017-04-17T12:35:52.561+10:002017-04-17T12:35:52.561+10:00Especially loved: After a few days the rain stops...Especially loved: After a few days the rain stops; after a few more the cat ventures out. Goodness, it is an entire story!Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-72388089591839357692017-04-17T11:41:43.553+10:002017-04-17T11:41:43.553+10:00Love how These sentences build upon each otherLove how These sentences build upon each otherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-18742779418601293722017-04-17T09:19:59.299+10:002017-04-17T09:19:59.299+10:00Congratulations. I believe you brilliantly and poe...Congratulations. I believe you brilliantly and poetically met your goal. (with a message - all returns)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-60889639477919157112017-04-17T09:15:00.534+10:002017-04-17T09:15:00.534+10:00Quite American for an Aussie :) ~Quite American for an Aussie :) ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-17270144095268939702017-04-17T08:15:35.461+10:002017-04-17T08:15:35.461+10:00Oh gosh these are absolute perfection, Rosemary!❤️...Oh gosh these are absolute perfection, Rosemary!❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-35980207876684415652017-04-17T07:40:04.486+10:002017-04-17T07:40:04.486+10:00So clever to do 10 American sentences. :) I love a...So clever to do 10 American sentences. :) I love all of these, Rosemary.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-68514719188274471602017-04-17T04:20:47.236+10:002017-04-17T04:20:47.236+10:00That's an impressive collection of American Se...That's an impressive collection of American Sentences, Rosemary - I couldn't manage ten! I especially like:<br /><br />'After the big April floods bumpy road surfaces muddy edges';<br />'After a few days the rain stops; after a few more the cat ventures out';<br />and.<br />'Summer over, I wear pyjamas to bed; the cat snuggles closer'.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-44221872441361076102017-04-17T02:57:42.904+10:002017-04-17T02:57:42.904+10:00Love these, especially with that ending sentence.....Love these, especially with that ending sentence... perfect!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-85154949585495736682017-04-17T01:18:46.170+10:002017-04-17T01:18:46.170+10:00I love that last sentence for its coziness and set...I love that last sentence for its coziness and settling inDebi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-941182775684816072017-04-17T00:02:51.646+10:002017-04-17T00:02:51.646+10:00They work alone and together.They work alone and together.Paul John Dearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08976172444697072142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-15458100234270646952017-04-16T23:54:00.593+10:002017-04-16T23:54:00.593+10:00These are really good, Rosemary!These are really good, Rosemary!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3313195297275159246.post-83408652776519564352017-04-16T20:59:26.502+10:002017-04-16T20:59:26.502+10:00After a few days the rain stops; after a few more ...After a few days the rain stops; after a few more the cat ventures out.<br /><br />I love the way the semi-colon creates the pause in this sentence. Thanks for sharing your rainy impressions of April.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com