I ... entered the poem of life, whose purpose is ... simply to witness the beauties of the world, to discover the many forms that love can take. (Barabara Blackman in 'Glass After Glass')

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22 September 2010

Verse Portrait 88: Launceston Girls

My Mum saw her sobbing backstage
after the elocution competitions —
second to my first. We were eight.

Grew up in the same suburb,
came to each other’s birthday parties,
attended High School together.

Thirty years later, surprise:
reunion onstage in another city,
reciting our own works.

Awhile inhabited the same
publications, venues, academies.
Supported each other, allies.

Went different ways again:
fiction her love, poetry mine —
rivalry, like childhood, past.

30 Poems in 30 Days, 2010: 12
Prompt: A poem about a rivalry


  1. This is lovely. I like the resolution, how you end it right where you should, without too much resolution--as much a new beginning as an ending. Very fine...your usual solid work. Thank you, peace,